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©2008-2009 ~ezranay
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This is a second, non-robot version of my tutoring poster. I think it's kinda clever. haha. Let me know what you guys think.

Done in Illustrator.

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:iconezranay:
LOL wet the bed.
:iconinaccurately-named:
I LOVE the concept. It's so clever. I especially like how it's just a little provocative - because I think we all know what goes in the last blank ;) - but acceptably so, because it's implied, and in such a fun way.

Jesus. My average is 93%, and you're convincing me I want a tutor.

I think it's my turn to offer a bit of a critique, now, right? While I love the concept and layout (Kerning! Heh.), the background just isn't doing it for me. The text is so candid... I'd like to see how it would look on a flat background, to have the words appear as blunt as they sound. What do you think?
:iconezranay:
Thanks so much, and I appreciate the crit! Tutors aren't all bad, too. You can always learn more, right? Anyway, I agree with you about the background, I think it takes away from the message, and I will try a flat color, possibly yellow or white. I think it will make it much stronger than it is now. Thanks so much!

(PS Congrats on your 93%)
:iconinaccurately-named:
Great! I can't wait to see the difference it makes.

And thanks. Heh. XD

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December 12, 2008
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